#452 -harbor

boats in the harbor

railing against their moorings

vicious  storm descends

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5 responses to “#452 -harbor

  1. Ellecee's avatar elleceef

    A strong haiku. Well done

  2. You paint a great picture with this haiku.

  3. I agree, a strong and evocative haiku.

  4. magicalmysticalteacher's avatar magicalmysticalteacher

    Those boats sound like petulant children, howling because they can’t have their way!

    Harbor No Ill Will

  5. Having just survive storms on land — and just returned for a week at sea … I can visualize this scenario strongly!!

    Nicely done. This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.

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