boats in the harbor
railing against their moorings
vicious storm descends
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Filed under haiku, haiku heights
Tagged as April, boats, ocean, rain, storm, wind
A strong haiku. Well done
You paint a great picture with this haiku.
I agree, a strong and evocative haiku.
Those boats sound like petulant children, howling because they can’t have their way!
Harbor No Ill Will
Having just survive storms on land — and just returned for a week at sea … I can visualize this scenario strongly!!
Nicely done. This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.
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A strong haiku. Well done
You paint a great picture with this haiku.
I agree, a strong and evocative haiku.
Those boats sound like petulant children, howling because they can’t have their way!
Harbor No Ill Will
Having just survive storms on land — and just returned for a week at sea … I can visualize this scenario strongly!!
Nicely done. This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.