savage autumn wind
cuts waves on Long Island Sound
seagulls brace on shore
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Tagged as beach, birds, fall, haiku, morning, October, wind
This is lovely. I can feel the wind and see the gulls!
Namaste………..cj
Thank you so much CJ – I really appreciate you reading and commenting on my haiku!
always windy and always seagull on long island sound, either side, NY or CT!!
my entry
Triolet VI
waaaa! i am craving for a swim before i read this! now I am craving more for a swim after i read this! waaaa! nice haiku!
Please check my entry too: “A Sudden Rush”. It’s a japanese choka form, since you write haiku you might enjoy it too. =)
you can also check my collections of poems i made @ A Murder of Poems
love the seaside imagery.
Very good. Thank you for sharing.
Victory’s Color
seagull on shore is a lovely imagery for me,
well done,
I was there many years ago. You brought me back! Victoria
Thanks so much for reading and commenting Victoria !
so abrupt, yet complete. i like that. i might try my hand at haiku soon because of you…
Wow – thank you much – I very much hope you try!
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This is lovely. I can feel the wind and see the gulls!
Namaste………..cj
Thank you so much CJ – I really appreciate you reading and commenting on my haiku!
always windy and always seagull on long island sound, either side, NY or CT!!
my entry
waaaa! i am craving for a swim before i read this! now I am craving more for a swim after i read this! waaaa! nice haiku!
Please check my entry too: “A Sudden Rush”. It’s a japanese choka form, since you write haiku you might enjoy it too. =)
you can also check my collections of poems i made @ A Murder of Poems
love the seaside imagery.
Very good. Thank you for sharing.
seagull on shore is a lovely imagery for me,
well done,
I was there many years ago. You brought me back! Victoria
Thanks so much for reading and commenting Victoria !
so abrupt, yet complete. i like that. i might try my hand at haiku soon because of you…
Wow – thank you much – I very much hope you try!