#323 – savage

savage autumn wind

cuts waves on Long Island Sound

seagulls brace on shore

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12 responses to “#323 – savage

  1. This is lovely. I can feel the wind and see the gulls!

    Namaste………..cj

  2. always windy and always seagull on long island sound, either side, NY or CT!!

    my entry

    Triolet VI

  3. waaaa! i am craving for a swim before i read this! now I am craving more for a swim after i read this! waaaa! nice haiku!

    Please check my entry too: “A Sudden Rush”. It’s a japanese choka form, since you write haiku you might enjoy it too. =)

  4. love the seaside imagery.

  5. seagull on shore is a lovely imagery for me,

    well done,

  6. I was there many years ago. You brought me back! Victoria

  7. so abrupt, yet complete. i like that. i might try my hand at haiku soon because of you…

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