September rain pours
windshield wipers dance with drums
song ends before storm
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Savage Haiku · Thoughts about poetry, life and happenings.
Savage Haiku 
Oh this is nice. I can’t wait till fall then I can dance in all the leaves.
Melanie
Beautiful! I’m hoping the September rains come soon!
My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/
love it,
every word counts.
🙂
Nice piece with vivid imagery. Kudos!
Great Haiku!
Here is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/scribbles.html
smart Haiku.
Hi there first time ever I was introduced to Haiku and not sure so much about them but yours are lovely and each and everyone of them leaves a smile on my face. Thanks
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/
love your Haiku.
well put summer rain sentiments.
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Like this! Wish is was raining here! =)
Thank you! The rain was short lived remnants of Lee – but between Lee and Irene we are floating – thanks for reading and commenting!
Nice..makes the feeling so lively.
Alcina
Alcina, thanks so much for reading and commenting – it was strange how the wipers and song were matched – that is what I love about haiku it forces you to pay attention!
i felt this… LOL driving in a rainy day. this is a real haiku. it expressed the event being told. nice entry!
Julian thanks for reading and commenting- I am so pleased you liked it!
Beautiful! Reminds me of the past few days and our sudden hit with early fall and the following rain. Thanks for sharing! 🙂
There has been a definite change – it is undeniable – thanks for reading
Great September Haiku capturing the breath and soul of the season
Very nice.
Check out my post: http://wp.me/s1LMFk-668
Well done … Haiku.
Namaste,
Isadora
My Rally entry :
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/09/14/autumn-a-will-i-must-obey/