August 17, 2011 · 2:29 am
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#220- tickling

wind swept open field

wheat whispers –  storm approaching-

tickling message

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19 responses to “#220- tickling”

  1. RoughWaterJohn's avatar RoughWaterJohn
    August 17, 2011 at 3:53 am

    WOW, you “got” the prompt. 🙂 This was beautiful.

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  2. Kalahari blues's avatar Kalahari blues
    August 17, 2011 at 9:47 am

    this is the power of the haiku-ever suggesting and relying on your intuition to get something out of the piece…

    wind swept open field…tagging a emotional response vulnerability that is open and exposed to dreading hurt (storm approaching)

    lovely one dear friend!

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  3. scape's avatar scape
    August 17, 2011 at 5:14 pm

    a lovely capture of a moment.. great

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  4. danroberson's avatar danroberson
    August 18, 2011 at 1:46 am

    Very nicely done. Great haiku.

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  5. charlesmashburn's avatar charlesmashburn
    August 18, 2011 at 11:12 am

    Beautiful! It’s as though your words belong to the picture.

    Here’s my story for week 8: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/

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  7. Tiffany Baylee Layton Pichette Maples's avatar West Lake
    August 18, 2011 at 1:47 pm

    storm approaching, wheat whispers,

    these lines pain vivid imagery here, cute and beautiful entry.

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  8. Tiffany Baylee Layton Pichette Maples's avatar West Lake
    August 18, 2011 at 1:47 pm

    storm approaching, wheat whispers,

    these lines pain vivid imagery here, cute and beautiful entry.

    🙂

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  9. KM's avatar Elyas Mulu Kiros
    August 18, 2011 at 4:59 pm

    I am a new fan of Haiku. And this piece only makes me appreciate it more!

    Thank you for sharing! iLike! 🙂

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  10. KM's avatar Elyas Mulu Kiros
    August 18, 2011 at 4:59 pm

    FYI: Ive linked you on my blog. 🙂

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  11. mish's avatar mish
    August 20, 2011 at 11:56 am

    Ah , the beauty of the haiku …
    You’ve captured the essence of the prompt in three lines – well done !

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  12. ~L's avatar ~L
    August 20, 2011 at 2:06 pm

    Love it:). How fun to read so many poems from different spins from the picture;) I really like this one a lot;)

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  13. Mike's avatar Mike
    August 20, 2011 at 5:37 pm

    Great haiku, so nicely done.
    Fits the photo so well.
    Thanks for a great read.

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  14. wordcoaster's avatar wordcoaster
    August 20, 2011 at 6:41 pm

    Love how different everyone’s take on the prompt is–lovely haiku 🙂

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  15. e.a.s. demers's avatar e.a.s. demers
    August 22, 2011 at 4:01 am

    Short, sweet, to the point! I knew there was a reason I loved Haiku’s!
    Awesome take on the prompt 🙂

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