August breezes whisper
spider’s web quakes, snares insect
leaves tremble outside
Alysa Nolen
18 Comments
Filed under haiku, haiku heights
Tagged as August, breeze, haiku, spider, summer, trees, wind
nice haiku
Thank you for your tremendous support
Summer is among us and soon it will subside. Beautiful!
It fades too quickly thank you for reading
You captured it nicely 🙂
http://fotochip.blogspot.com/2011/08/whisper-in-air.html
that is one huge spider web, he’s working overtime as fall creeps in, nice haiku
Lovely haiku!
Beautifully written. We have some very large spiders around here that are such graceful and beautiful creatures. You really brought the picture to life with your words. Thank you.
VERY nice!! 🙂
Wonderful picture of a big web. Nice Haiku too!
hehe, leaves are scared. a sound of summer
I enjoy the contrast here…even the leaves tremble in fear of the spider. Rosie
A curious sensation as I stare at the picture and beautifully written words accompanying it!!
Thank you so much for reading Nanka!
Oh I got the “creeped out”. The combination of the writing had me creeped but the picture got me all the way out! Run Mama Run! Thanks Good Writing!
A lovely haiku. All trembling at the thought of the spider.
Very nice – an elegant haiku
You might like this:
In the August heat The spider and the farmer Await the harvest
Quite beautiful n elegant!
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nice haiku
Thank you for your tremendous support
Summer is among us and soon it will subside. Beautiful!
It fades too quickly thank you for reading
You captured it nicely 🙂
http://fotochip.blogspot.com/2011/08/whisper-in-air.html
that is one huge spider web, he’s working overtime as fall creeps in, nice haiku
Lovely haiku!
Beautifully written. We have some very large spiders around here that are such graceful and beautiful creatures. You really brought the picture to life with your words. Thank you.
VERY nice!! 🙂
Wonderful picture of a big web. Nice Haiku too!
hehe, leaves are scared. a sound of summer
I enjoy the contrast here…even the leaves tremble in fear of the spider.
Rosie
A curious sensation as I stare at the picture and beautifully written words accompanying it!!
Thank you so much for reading Nanka!
Oh I got the “creeped out”. The combination of the writing had me creeped but the picture got me all the way out! Run Mama Run! Thanks Good Writing!
A lovely haiku.
All trembling at the thought of the spider.
Very nice – an elegant haiku
You might like this:
In the August heat
The spider and the farmer
Await the harvest
Quite beautiful n elegant!