#212- whisper

Haiku Heights Prompt #56

August breezes whisper

spider’s web quakes, snares insect

leaves tremble outside

Alysa Nolen

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18 responses to “#212- whisper

  1. Summer is among us and soon it will subside. Beautiful!

  2. that is one huge spider web, he’s working overtime as fall creeps in, nice haiku

  3. Beautifully written. We have some very large spiders around here that are such graceful and beautiful creatures. You really brought the picture to life with your words. Thank you.

  4. Wonderful picture of a big web. Nice Haiku too!

  5. hehe, leaves are scared. a sound of summer

  6. I enjoy the contrast here…even the leaves tremble in fear of the spider.
    Rosie

  7. A curious sensation as I stare at the picture and beautifully written words accompanying it!!

  8. Oh I got the “creeped out”. The combination of the writing had me creeped but the picture got me all the way out! Run Mama Run! Thanks Good Writing!

  9. A lovely haiku.
    All trembling at the thought of the spider.

  10. KjM's avatar KjM

    Very nice – an elegant haiku

    You might like this:

    In the August heat
    The spider and the farmer
    Await the harvest

  11. Vinay Leo R.'s avatar Leo

    Quite beautiful n elegant!

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