#210 – unseen

unseen mourning dove

sings haunting lonely ballad

taints summer morning

photo by Manyee DeSandies

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3 responses to “#210 – unseen

  1. Truly a beautiful haiku, honest to its roots; only I believe the mourning dove enhances the summer morning. Its call, so hauntingly a love song, brings me nothing but joy.

  2. Lovely. Somewhat wistful. Somewhat not. Darkly vibrant, the imagery.

  3. Interesting, your use of the word, taint. Like Mike, I love the haunting sound of them. Lovely poem and perfect picture to go with it. Hugs, pat

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