#144- inky

inky black night sky

fast moving clouds block bright moon

deliver cool rain

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24 responses to “#144- inky

  1. stunning word painting, thanks for sharing.

    Happy Rally.

  2. Gorgeous! Makes me think of monsoon season in the tropics, when you really want it to rain, so you can sit in it and cool down.
    Thanks!

  3. Wish it would do the same here in New Mexico!

  4. This reminds me of a storm we had a few weeks ago. Such clear imagery!

  5. Beautiful picture. I think I’ll go outside and chant it. Need rain!

  6. A great play on words of the passage of time!

  7. Beautiful haiku love the imagery

  8. Rain! It’s rained everywhere but here. Love your haiku and the picture you used.

  9. Yes! No surprise you are a haiku specialist! Somewhere between seeing it and feeling it, I’m entranced. Thank you for this haikudoyou!

  10. A great read and a vivid picture.

  11. californiabean's avatar californiabean

    Memories of how it feels just before a night rain; nicely done – the way a haiku should be written.

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