drooping summer bloom
bows to weight of noon sun
unrequited thirst
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Filed under haiku, micropoetry, poetry
Tagged as flower, haiku, heat, poetry, summer, thirst
this is so pretty and just perfect for the form ~
I am new to haiku forms so its a delight to read yours ~
Hope it rains would hate to see a bloom go to waste 🙂 You have wonderfully worded your Haiku!!
Thanks so much for reading I so appreciate all of your comments
I can feel the sun weighing everything down on those hot, hot days!
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this is so pretty and just perfect for the form ~
I am new to haiku forms so its a delight to read yours ~
Hope it rains would hate to see a bloom go to waste 🙂 You have wonderfully worded your Haiku!!
Thanks so much for reading I so appreciate all of your comments
I can feel the sun weighing everything down on those hot, hot days!