#37 -final resting place

5 responses to “#37 -final resting place”

1. Clark Strand

   May 17, 2011 at 1:18 pm

   This haiku makes me think of an important concept in ecology called a “sink.” A sink is the “final resting place” of any product and byproduct created by human beings–everything from the dead jeans you mentioned to the hydrocarbons “sunk” in the atmosphere. Interesting how this poem juxtaposes the deer and the jeans. A very fresh poem, though admittedly a sad one, too. Nice to see that you’re enjoying Seeds.

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   • 15homegreenhome

     May 17, 2011 at 1:50 pm

     I am humbled by your comments and profoundly grateful- I absolutely love your work – Thank you

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2. Jingle

   July 12, 2011 at 4:49 pm

   thought provoking, thanks for sharing you rock.

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3. Shashi

   July 15, 2011 at 3:32 am

   Interesting to put dead deer and dead jeans together… so stark in contrast… liked it.

   Thanks for joining in the Poetry Potluck WK 43 which I am hosting for the first time… hope you have liked it too…. and wish to see you again…

   Shashi
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   • 15homegreenhome

     July 15, 2011 at 11:42 am

     Thank you Shashi for your comments and for Poetry Potluck Wk 43!

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