October 8, 2011 · 10:55 pm
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#325 – impossible

flowing through my hands

impossible to hold on

this moment in time

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13 responses to “#325 – impossible”

  1. magicalmysticalteacher's avatar magicalmysticalteacher
    October 9, 2011 at 1:46 am

    I find it frustrating that we can’t hold on to THIS moment! 🙂

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  2. zongrik's avatar zongrik
    October 9, 2011 at 1:48 am

    but if you wrote about it, then you have held on to it….so it wasn’t impossible

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  4. becca givens's avatar becca givens
    October 9, 2011 at 4:36 am

    Brilliant!!! Probably the only thing really impossible ~~

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  5. Hazel's avatar Hazel
    October 9, 2011 at 12:51 pm

    Hold on a bit more! But it has flowed through. Impossible indeed.

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  6. Melanie Jan Bishop's avatar Melanie Jan Bishop
    October 9, 2011 at 5:12 pm

    Excellent use of prompt. Great Haiku.

    Melanie

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  7. Andy Sewina's avatar Andy Sewina
    October 9, 2011 at 10:49 pm

    WoW! What a thought, if only we could stop time!

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  8. CURIOUStotheMAX's avatar creativitytothemax
    October 10, 2011 at 3:25 am

    I really like your haiku and the images it evokes – time flowing = perfect

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  9. Sharmishtha's avatar Sharmishtha
    October 11, 2011 at 11:23 am

    wonderful truth. sad but just cant be changed.

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  10. Mike's avatar Mike
    October 11, 2011 at 1:04 pm

    A lovely haiku.
    There are times when you wish you could just freeze time.

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  11. Nanka's avatar Nanka
    October 12, 2011 at 7:50 am

    Beautiful and well said!! Time and tide waits for no one!!

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