melancholy feel
sweeping through the opened house
cold night, shutting doors
Image by Patti Masciantoni
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Tagged as cool, haiku, night, September, summer
well done
Very nice Haiku.
Lovely. You capture that melancholy feel very well.
sad voice..nice one ~
Nice haiku, well done!!
Let morning open the doors… and the melancholy feel go..
Woodsmoke soon in air Hard to get out of the bed Sunshine warms nothing
It’s that time of year….
And so it starts…waking up, feeling that nip in the air under the summer covers.
Nicely done, I can feel the cold here!
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well done
Very nice Haiku.
Lovely. You capture that melancholy feel very well.
sad voice..nice one ~
Nice haiku, well done!!
Let morning open the doors… and the melancholy feel go..
Woodsmoke soon in air
Hard to get out of the bed
Sunshine warms nothing
It’s that time of year….
And so it starts…waking up, feeling that nip in the air under the summer covers.
Nicely done, I can feel the cold here!