view from car window
fresh cut hay left discarded
like dirty laundry
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Filed under haiku, micropoetry
Tagged as car, hay, September, summer
smart metaphor.
🙂
first time I saw fresh cut hey to look like laundry very well done http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/04/haggle-baggily/
Great visual write! Well done!
My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/blood-on-the-moon-2/
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smart metaphor.
🙂
first time I saw fresh cut hey to look like laundry very well done
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/04/haggle-baggily/
Great visual write! Well done!
My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/blood-on-the-moon-2/